Thursday, March 11, 2010

Chained Emotions !!

Gone are the years,
Gone are the days,
Gone are the opportunities,
Then why do I still feel the pain !!

Times have changed,
I've grown in the world of uncertainity,
You've grown into a world of togetherness,
And We've grown into a world of happiness,
Then why do I still feel the pain !!

Never felt the touch,
Never felt the warmth,
Never wiped your tears,
Never laughed with you,
Never held your hands,
Then why do i still feel the pain !!

Your beautiful eyes have captivated many,
Your heavenly smile makes me wanna sing to you,
The aroma of freshness around you,
Makes me wanna wake up to you everyday,
Then why do I still feel the pain !!

Days and nights are not enough,
To admire your astounding beauty,
Time is not by our side nor the world is,
But still wanna keep looking at you forever,
Don't wanna blink my eyes, time is not on my side
Now i know why I still feel the pain,
Not sure if you are feeling the same

Bloody hell !! I was sitting on a damn nail !!!!! :)

12 cared to comment:

hitesh rawat on 4:25 PM said...

yea....sitting on a nail and going through all these transitions ......very much the same feeling.... :)

so this is the first poem i read of yours....... and now i know you can rhyme

Shashi said...

@ hitesh..
transitions are many .. but this one was the 1st one wid nails.. :)
ive written few more poems.. do read when u get time..

Momo's Ma on 4:34 PM said...

hey bro, didnt know there was a poet in you. super. nice use of words. will chk out ur other poems too. :)

Nalini Hebbar on 11:50 AM said...

had me laughing for a long time...have you gotten off the nail?

s.H.a.S.h.I on 6:44 PM said...

@ nailini..

yaa kinda out of it.. but it still hurts.. :P

s.H.a.S.h.I on 6:45 PM said...

@ momo's ma
yaa .. i like to write.. have written a few poetries.. like to put my creative side in writing :)

akanksha on 8:27 PM said...

Nice poetry!

Saras on 8:32 PM said...

Congrats on a great indiRank, 80!!

Rockstra Sid on 1:36 PM said...

Beautiful! very well written :)

Zave on 5:53 PM said...

Great write.
Touching and overly hilarious!

SAFFIRE BLUE on 1:16 PM said...

I seriously thought you are telling the pain of the love that you felt but remain unaccomplished.
Though the 'nail' twist was shock but still hilarious...sort of funky style. Bringing out the unexpected when the reader most expected. :)
Good one.

s.H.a.S.h.I on 1:18 PM said...

thanks people.. just a twist in the story.. :)P

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